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I love the ocean,
I love the breeze,
I love the wind,
I love the trees.
I love the sun,
I love the bees,
I love the fish,
swim with the fish,
my fondest wish.
A song my mom sang to me.
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:iconnewmuffin:
NewMuffin Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw....this is a cute one!
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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Slinky1996 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol i love the little rhyme at the end
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD THNKS
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:iconslinky1996:
Slinky1996 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol welcome ^-^
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thnks
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:iconkatiedop:
KatieDOP Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this! 'Course that just may be my odd love of fish speaking ...
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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creativepoet Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Writer
Sounds fishy. lol

*slaps hand* That was a horrible pun, I'm sorry. >.> I do like the rhyming scheme of this poem in all honesty. :3
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol!
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:icontucedaay:
Tucedaay Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very pretty :)
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconinvictus47:
Invictus47 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Did this inspire you to write the poem about your wish to be a fish? When I read the end, it reminded me of that poem.
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah it did
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:iconkamiishi:
Kamiishi Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist
Just dreaming to be a fish, aint'cha? LOL XD
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yep
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:iconsephiropth3461:
sephiropth3461 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
brilliant
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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Widget101 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
see, my parents couldn't just be simple and sing me songs, no, they had to act out storybooks like nutjobs... XD

this is very nice, it brings back a lot of fond memories from my childhood
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh thnks!
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:iconwidget101:
Widget101 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
anytime! and thanks for the watch!
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok
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KaarlaaXD Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Writer
I really do love your simplicity ♥ I tried to emulate your style, to try it out, but I couldn't pull it off. :shrug:
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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:iconkaarlaaxd:
KaarlaaXD Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012  Student Writer
you're welcome
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:iconclouded-rachel:
Clouded-Rachel Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Writer
Very sweet song. :)
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks
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Babygirl101897 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw its so sweet
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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Babygirl101897 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YOur welcome
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok
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TobbieGurl385 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw. That's beautiful. ^^
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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AngelinTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol my mom sings Simple Man, and Wicked Games, and stuff and plays guitar but that's cuz she wants to not cuz I want her to ;p but it's pretty hearing her sing and play the guitar
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconangelinthewolf:
AngelinTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You make that face a lot...
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love smiling!
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:iconangelinthewolf:
AngelinTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Smiles make me sick...but misery loves company...
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh i like smiling
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:iconangelinthewolf:
AngelinTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...smiles are good...smiles....make me want to cry.
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok then
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Readswaytoomuch Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww, so cute.
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my mom sings it to me =)
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julie339qweqe Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
I like it a LOT.
:love:

ps :fish:
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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:iconkorothesilverwolf:
KoroTheSilverWolf Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww.... i love it
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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danyangel8 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Writer
A very cute song :D My mom will sing me spanish songs instead like la cucaracha XD
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:iconlandnarwals:
LandNarwals Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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ASMiniatureStudio Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Professional Artist
This is so inpsirational, it really describes how I want my main charactor to feel about the sacred grove she goes to when she mediatates
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